VSS-1 (Very Short Story-1)
VSS is a series of Very Short Stories and my kinda first attempt at short prose.
I hope I can churn out sufficient stuff with time. Do let me know any honest feedbacks.
Story-1
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Knock.
About 15 guys stood there, with a cruel smile. No anticipations.
Before realization, pleading cries roared the air,he was being kicked
and beaten with shoes.
Mercilessly.
It had been a year long wait.
Each chanced upon a kick and even the meekish boy prided on his action.
Insufficient sadism then led them to pour his dress with brown and white.
It all ended and he returned.
His mobile beeped a message "Happy Birthday"
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posted by L @ 10:42 AM
6 Comments:
aww! great!!!!
too good!
@raj: :)Glad that u liked it..!! Well yup the next VSS will be up shortly
@Unaiza Nasim : Thanx a lot..!! :)
From photographer to story writer...
Way to go dude!!
very nice funda this "VSS" ...seems haikuish
When you have nothing to look forward to… you
start looking back. The past is a comfortable place to be in.
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