Friday, April 21, 2006

VSS-4

This is my fourth VSS (Very Short Story), Hope you liked the previous ones.
As usual comments and feedback invited.
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"One Night Stand" viewers can relate better.
Only difference being, our "stand-up comedian" was a "Hero".
On the HOT chair,
He joked loud about not daring to buy the "packet" at the med store, laughed out the curse made to his "neighbour" over shared toothpaste and confessed the creepy proposal he made to "the gal" armed with a rusted borrowed ring.
I smiled, the "neighbour" laughed and "the gal" gave a wide blush at the camera.
Amidst the giggles, my signal brought everything to silence, and the mood changed.
Gloomy eyes stared at our hero ; and were finally answered. Expressions strengthened at the slow punctuated references. Its wasnt comedy any more, and before feelings could get better, tears overtook him.
He got a standing ovation and applause, and hugging friends comforted him aside.
And then, suddenly laughs were overheard,
Oh! our next comedian is up....!!

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PS: I am really sorry if many of you cd not relate to the event. Actually caters to a niche audience.

6 Comments:

Blogger L said...

Does Valfi and senti ring any bells??

7:24 AM  
Blogger virgo said...

infact i guessed it rite :)
nicely composed...cheers!!

9:39 AM  
Blogger virgo said...

infact i guessed it rite :)
nicely composed...cheers!!

-sirish

9:39 AM  
Blogger Ar Ar Ar Arrrrr said...

Tu kya bolna chaha raha hai yaar...meri toh kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha....

I think its the new hair gel Im using today..ma brain has just stopped working :(

8:32 PM  
Blogger AlterinG Abhishek said...

Hey...
lagta hai yahan pe kisi ko kutch samajh hi nahi aa raha hai rey..
let me know if you can understand about my latest post?

4:40 AM  
Blogger messys musings said...

didnt get u here...

heres the link to the community

http://www.orkut.com/Community.aspx?cmm=13144494

6:20 PM  

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