VSS-6
This is my sixth VSS (Very Short Story). Hope you liked the previous ones.
As usual comments and feedback invited.
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An adrenaline rush, followed by a dash and there you are.
Just Arrived.
Souls surround you. You put up a smile of satisfaction, followed by a grin and then dawns the "purpose".
The ground trembles beneath your feet, but you stand undaunted.
You survey the scene with a sense of eagerness. Looking around for "opportunities".
A short intuitive analysis coupled with prior experience draws your attention to the three people huddled at the end.
"ARE YOU WATCHING CLOSELY ? "
A guy in blue, a lady in uniform and a Sahib in formals.
The guy pulls out a cigarette, and burns your hopes. Recollect Rule #6 - A relaxed guy with a cigarette, assumes a buffered uninterrupted time of atleast 7 minutes.
The uniform is adorned with a company badge. You attempt a piercing look at it. To decipher the corporation. However , the faded colours betray you and success seems far. Also no characteristic accessory supports you.
The Sahib works at an organization. Red betel in his tongue confirms it a "Sarkari". A rugged suitcase and a "file" accompany him.
Recollect Rule #11- Any official papers associated with a Govt. employee throws more light than any other Rules.
You read the "file " cover. Beginning with a breathtaking speed but the local language snailing you down. Lack of any vocabulary mocks your understanding.
You feel piqued.
Suddenly you notice "it". You draw close to the "Subject".
In a minute, the Sahib wakes up and you take his place.
You sigh, " the whole cycle was worth it..!"
After all, its still 34.19 minutes left to reach Chatrapati Shivaji Terminus (Main) .
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ps: This story is Post-Titled: "Capturing a seat".
pps: Post-Title(def): A title given to a piece of prose/poetry only after it is read , in order to retain its suspense.
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Update : Here is an interesting slideshow on the topic by a friend of mine.
11 Comments:
Great one... specially mumbaikars will love it as they can relate to it better...
and the slide show is also good man.. ... KAA is also too good.
nice one
tammi: Thanx yaar :) , yup the "mumbai local" guys must know the pain ..! Look at kaa's other slides also .. quite interesting ones..
ayaskant: Hey thanx that u looked by :)
long time since i been here. how r u doing buddy?
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